Paint Ball! #1

 
  I was walking to the paint ball area.  My hart pounding agents my chest.  The ref said "15 minutes," and yells "GO!"

  I run behind a wall with my friend Ben next to me. My team was Me, Ben, and my friends Mason, La Von, Nate, and Locus.  The other team is my mom, dad, brother Landry and his two friends Adam and Jack also Mason's dad.  "Plunk, plunk, plunk!"  The pant was going every ware.  They were coming around back of the castle.  "Plunk!" my dad was out!  I looked at my hand it was hurting I was hit!  "Plunk!" Mason's dad was hit in the mask.  "Take cover!" yells Ben.

  "Plunk plunk!" Locus and La Von where out!!! Although Adam was to.  "Plunk!" my mom was out!  All who is left Nate, Ben, Landry, and Jack!  Jack and Landry where in the castle.  "Plunk!" Nate was out!  It was 2 on one!  Landry and Jack where in the castle and Ben was behind a wall. "Plunk!" Landry was hit!  "Ten seconds left!" the ref yelled. 

  Ben ran across the castle.  "We going to win" I thought although doting my self.
Jack and Ben where fairing pant balls like mad men.  "9 Plunk 8 Plunk 7 Plunk 6 Plunk 5 Plunk 4 Plunk 3 Plunk!  BAM!"  Jack was hit we won!  But that was only the first round... 

Never give up and keep trying!